Further develoment...

I took the same approach to my 3rd design as I did with the about us page. Because the feedback on the design itself was good there wasn't much that I wanted to change, so I included some orange in the form of the numbers.

 

Although I haven't altered much else with this design at this stage, the change of colour has just lifted the whole image and helped tie it together with my other design on the page before. I am starting to learn thanks to the professionals feedback, that sometimes all that is necessary is the slightest change and that can make the biggest difference.  Still not 100% sold on whether the typeface is working, but I will maybe revisit this at a later date.